Score: 5

"Potential is there"

submission: [ Prototype Parody ]

date: December 1, 2009

I agree with most people. But, unlike most who just criticize (criticise?), im gonna help and throw out A FEW IDEAS INSTEAD OF GRIPING-

-how about something lame for his hands to transform into?
-some joke about "consuming" people (consuming consumers?)
-how you can walk up to a base, take the appearance of the head guard, run behind one building for 3 seconds, and walk back in and they don't react?
-what kind of 'work' would he take at the end of the game? (yes, think dirty)

The two jokes were good, and this animation was a nice teaser. Can't wait to see the rest.

Score: 8

"A fun "Choose Your Path" game"

submission: Dead Frontier: Outbreak

date: September 16, 2009

But the small differences between the voice-overs and the text could be fixed, and possibly a *skip to choice* option for those who read quickly, or who dont want to listen to the voice.

I've played the MMO, and am currently a 35+lvl chef, and can say that this kind of story is good in explaining why there are certain character classes in the online game.

Score: 8

"Good use of quotes!"

submission: Messed-Up Bible Stories 6

date: September 15, 2009

Why didn't you mention the part about "And so his daughters laid with him, to continue their liniage" (aka did it with their father in order to have kids) part? I wonder if the God in your animations would be upset over that...

Score: 9

"Was ok, but got great at the end"

submission: Kryptonite (Acapella)

date: June 7, 2009

The beginning seemed a little...lacking to me, for some weird reason. Maybe becuase of the way you sang it. But I DEFINATLY loved the ending part. What was that, your voice used 3 times over? 4? I can hear all the pitches, and I definatly think you've earned respect from this.